Talk:Steve Schullo

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Stephen A. Schullo, Ph.D. (UCLA '96) was born to Italian immigrant mother and US born Italian-American father. Grew up on a farm in northern Wisconsin near a small town called Cumberland. Attended public schools throughout this academic career. He served in the Marine Corps during the Vietnam War, wounded in combat. He taught in the Los Angeles Unified School District (LAUSD) for 24 years and UCLA Extension. Steve wrote investment articles for union newspaper for 13 years (circ. 50,000). Thrice featured retirement plan advocate in the Los Angeles Times and U.S. News and World Report. He started an investor self-help group for teacher colleagues at LAUSD and wrote 5,000 posts in three investment forums since 1997. Frequently quoted by the media, testified at California State legislative hearings, honored by the Los Angeles teachers' union for his retirement planning advocacy. Since 2006 he has served on LAUSD's Investment Advisory Committee and former co-chair. The committee monitors 457b/403b of 55,000 former and current LAUSD employees, worth a total $2.0 billion in assets.

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Stephen A. Schullo, Ph.D. (UCLA '96) was born to an Italian immigrant mother and US-born Italian-American father. He grew up on a farm in northern Wisconsin near a small town called Cumberland and attended public schools throughout this academic career. He served in the Marine Corps during the Vietnam War, and was wounded in combat.

He taught in the Los Angeles Unified School District (LAUSD) for 24 years and UCLA Extension. At LAUSD, he started an investor self-help group for teacher colleagues and, since 1997, wrote 5,000 posts in three investment forums. Since 2006, he has served on LAUSD's Investment Advisory Committee and former co-chair. The committee monitors 457b/403b of 55,000 former and current LAUSD employees, worth a total $2.0 billion in assets.

Steve wrote investment articles for a union newspaper for 13 years (circ. 50,000) and was a three-time featured retirement plan advocate in the Los Angeles Times and U.S. News and World Report.

He was frequently quoted by the media, testified at California State legislative hearings, and honored by the Los Angeles teachers' union for his retirement planning advocacy. --LadyGeek 19:49, 18 December 2012 (CST)


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''Stephen A. Schullo, Ph.D. (UCLA '96) was born to an Italian immigrant mother and US-born Italian-American father. He grew up on a farm in northern Wisconsin near a small town called Cumberland and attended public schools throughout his academic career. He served in the Marine Corps during the Vietnam War, and was wounded in combat. ''

''He taught in the Los Angeles Unified School District (LAUSD) for 24 years and and also taught with UCLA Extension. At LAUSD, he started an investor self-help group for teacher colleagues and, since 1997, has written 5,000 posts in three investment forums. Since 2006, he has served on, and is a former co-chair of, LAUSD's Investment Advisory Committee. The committee monitors the 457b/403b plans of 55,000 former and current LAUSD employees, worth a total $2.0 billion in assets.''

Steve wrote investment articles for a union newspaper for 13 years (circ. 50,000) and was a three-time featured retirement plan advocate in the Los Angeles Times and U.S. News and World Report.

He has been frequently quoted by the media, has testified at California State legislative hearings, and was honored by the Los Angeles teachers' union for his retirement planning advocacy. --Blbarnitz 01:54, 19 December 2012 (CST)