Talk:Individual Bonds vs a Bond Fund

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Good start. I inserted some comments in the page. In general I think it could benefit from a more tutorial style, more links to terms, and more back-up for assertions. I apologize for not fixing all this myself right now. I did a bit and commented on the rest. --Sewall 12:25, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

sewall, please don't create dangling links, as they make the wiki seem broken. If you want to create a definitional page like primary and secondary markets, please add the links to it after you create the page. Also, please make comments to other users on this page, rather than in the article. Thanks. Dan Kohn 15:09, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Dan, it is not necessary to have a public conversation about our stylistic differences. Please revert the page if you don't like how I edited it. --Sewall 16:21, 1 April 2009 (UTC)